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Sweet Surrender

Vivian Ennis
1 min readFeb 28, 2019

A Poem Written by Vivian Ennis 05/15/2000

As your hand touches my skin
I can feel your tenderness from deep within

I reach to touch you back
and then there is no lack

The feeling of your breath on me
is like the cool breeze of the sea

As my mouth nibbles upon your ear
and sweat rolls down your body like a tear

You lean over to kiss my breast
and I place your head upon my chest

I pull you in so close to me
that our bodies are filled with Ecstasy

The heat of our passion begins to arise
and I begin to want you more inside

The sounds you make as you begin to erect
and your pleasure rod looks so perfect

The sounds you make they excite me so
as our bodies are tossing to and fro

As you open my legs so very wide
I want you more than ever deep inside

To feel the thrust of your excitement below
arouses me to the point of letting go

I release a river
of sweet surrender

Then your body seems to shiver and shake
it feels just like an earthquake

Written by Vivian Ennis 05/15/2000

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Vivian Ennis
Vivian Ennis

Written by Vivian Ennis

I love writing everything from poetry to thoughts about life ! Some old and new words to share. I am not religious but spiritual referring to God in my work!

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